Moment to moment
In this wasted land
The trees still rise to greet the sun and the moon
In every untenable moment
Lives a parallel moment
Where the rivers still flow
The birds still sing
The flowers still bloom
When tenderness and harshness collide
In this wasted land
The rivers still flow
The birds still sing
The flowers still bloom
The trees still rise to greet the sun and the moon
Moment to moment
© 2022 MW
For David’s Wea’ve Written Weekly (W3) poetry prompt on Skeptic’s Kaddish. Kerf Roig is our prompt poet this week. Guidelines: Responsive poem. 16 lines or less. Must start and end with the same line.
eerily true, so haunting!
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Hi Kate. Thanks for joining me here. Many blessings to you 💕
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Hi! ❤
I just want to let you know that our next W3 prompt, hosted by Britta Benson, is now live!
Much love,
David
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Very beautiful prose. I find nature so healing.
Many Blessings to you MW
Lisa xoxo
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Thank you, LIsa. All things good to you, MW ❤️💜🧡
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I heard your words as a song…<3 always, MW. xXx
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Wonderful! Thank you, Jane. So nice to see you here. Everything good to you, MW 💗
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Hi, Abi ❤
The 5th W3 prompt, hosted by murisopsis is now live! Enjoy:
Much love,
David
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Hope to participate again in the near future, David. W3 is fun and creative. 🥰
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It’s nice to see a poem from you. It’s a mystery how I can look out my window, see the sun on the trees and birds and squirrels at the feeder, meanwhile the globe is burning down. The world continues to turn, I guess, regardless of what humans are doing.
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Many thanks, Hetty! Great comment on the dichotomies of our world. 💗
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Indeed the rivers still flow and birds do sing.. All flow within the Moment… without a care of tomorrow.. ❤ Wonderful verse.
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Thank you for your feedback, sweet Sue. I want to be a river or a bird or a tree. 🥰
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A bird, free to fly… a River free to meander, a tree to put down roots, while reaching for the sky… Joy in all three.. ❤
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Amen!! 🙏🏼
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❤
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The repetition works so well, making it lyrical and magical.
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Thank you! Your feedback is very much appreciated. 🙏🏼
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Powerful and beautiful
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Thank you for reading and commenting, E. Good to see you here. 💗
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I love your writing and your poem dear friend. This is very beautiful. Keep writing. Have a nice weekend.
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Thank you, dear Giannis. It’s very kind of you to stop by to read, comment and encourage. Enjoy your weekend. Many blessings to you, MW 🙏🏼
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Beautiful poem dear MW..
It feels like those parallel moments are speeding ever closer..
Which is why Nature is the very best place to take refuge.. Much love and hugs my friend ❤
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Mother Nature does wonders for mind, body and spirit…along with our precious furbabies. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Love n’ hugs backatcha. 🧡
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❤ 🦋✨💛
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💖💖💖
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Beautifully expressed – nature carries on, the world still spins …
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Thank you for you lovely comment!
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You are most welcome ☺️
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This reads like a song to me. You could set it to music
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Thank you, JYP! That’s music to my ears! 🎶
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I have a friend that composes music and lyrics on her guitar. Maybe I’ll ask her to make a song out of it. I’m jazzed that you said it reads like a song. 😍
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Excellent poem. Loved it.
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Thank you, Kamal. 🥰
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Always welcome dear.
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Wow.. great piece! Thank you for sharing
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Simone. 🥰
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Of course! Looking forward to your future posts 😊
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What a lovely thing to say. 🙏🏼 I was thinking of giving up blogging. 🥰
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Oh no, why’d you consider that? Your posts are awesome!
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Many thanks!! You are so kind and encouraging. 💗
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This is so beautiful..
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Thank you, Mich! 🙏🏼
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