
Forsaken supplication,
slivers of fractured sunlight,
filtered through stained glass,
warming her fragile flesh…
Swaying with bended knees,
in this primordial House of God,
walls whispering tales of ancient lust…
Encased in prayer she awaits,
invocations in The Holy Tongue,
escaping unbidden from her lips…
Her soul cries for release and vindication,
corporeal scars uncovered,
her robes turned to ashes and dust…
The Bride enters,
a likeness cloaked in amber shadows,
formed from shards of brokenness…
Secrets of suffering revealed,
in rivulets of tears,
carving patterns,
into time worn stone
© 2017 MW All Rights Reserved
A tribute to all the women who have suffered in the name of religion.
Cheers to OLN at dVerse Poet’s Pub and Mish, who used the expression “If walls could talk” as our inspiration.
Ouch….
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Hi my friend.. I saw your like upon a comment.. Its been so long here since you posted.. I hope all is well.. Sending Love your way.. hugs my friend Sue xx
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Layer by layer she is deep and mystical! Loved it 💖
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Thank you ❤
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She is! You describe her well. I would love to read your poetry too. 💖
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Beautiful words. Awesome, awesome imagery in your poignant poem. Your words also make me think of different meanings and symbolism behind them…and the thoughts I have linger: meaning that this is well done!
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Thanks so much for your beautiful comment, Sageleaf! It’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance. ❤️
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I hope you’ll start blogging some of your teachings and thoughts. I would come by to comment.
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What a lovely thing to say. I have not been blogging much in the past year and a half or so…one of those things where spirit has said to go within for awhile. But seeing your words, and seeing the encouragement of others in my circles, you have me thinking that it might be time to move forward with my writing. Hehe. I hope you have been well. 🙏 Happy December to you.
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I’ve been on hiatus from this blog and my newer blog (linked to my name)…but hope the words will start to flow or trickle in again soon. I’ll be by to appreciate if you start to write again. Happy December and abundant blessings to you. 🙏
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breaking through the shadows,
well done dear heart
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Thanks so much Eddie. Good to see you here.
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Good to be here, as always
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😊🌹✌️️
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the pain. the desperation. oh soooo clear!
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Thanks for your comment Rosema. 🌹
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always Momma! ❤
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💕❤️
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A darkness and a sense of yearning. Nicely written.
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I feel the darkness. Yet I must feel the light.
I truly am – a big fan of your work my friend. 🙂
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Thanks bunches Charlie! Love your poetry! 😊
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You are welcome my friend. 🙂 Know this. I will always cherish our friendship. You are my favorite writers. Bless you with so much love and peace. 🙂
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Brava! 🌹
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Thanks hon! 🌹
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I feel the darkness where there should be light.
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Yes. Unfortunately. Thank you for being here Mish. 🌹
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I have learned something new today, thank you ~ I enjoyed the revelation in the end ~ Mystical write but we all can identify with the elements of release and supplication ~ Thanks for joining us ~
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I’m happy to know you learned something new during your visit. I love learning new things from each other. Thank you for your feedback Grace. 🌹
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Spiritual suffering and weekly renewal of faith and love.
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Thank you Brian. You comment feels so hopeful. _/|\_
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Hello MWM – oh these words set me on fire – bring me to darkness – fill me with surrender – your poetic truths are like swords – rough edged in their raw honesty – as I feel him, the priest, his hands, hear his lies, feel the promise of the risen Christ in his betrayal – I followed him,even when the back f his hand stung my cheek, I was believing he was saving me – in time, I saved myself, with my faith still there – I freed myself from him –
how did you know?
Love Gail
peace………
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Oh my dear Gail, sharing your lived experience is a powerful gift which helps other people suffering spiritually in silence, to know they are not alone. Your courage, strength and willingness to speak openly from the depths of your soul fills me with gratitude and thankfulness for your presence in the world and my sphere of existence.
“Your poetic truths are like swords – rough edged in their raw honesty”…. I’m so deeply honored to be the recipient of those words. How did I know? The words just bleed out, insisting to be released. I think we are together and united in our ‘knowingness.’ Abundant peace and love to you, Momma Moon xo 💜xo
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It is you that frees me to surrender to my own truths openly. I am one with you along this journey – we have seen one another from our souls –
Love Gail
peace……
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I am blessed by your companionship on this trek! Love you Gail! ❤️💜💕
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Secrets of suffering revealed,
in rivulets of tears,
Sad discovery of one tortured in mind or bodily! One can only sympathize!
Hank
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I thank you for your sympathies and compassion, Hank. _/|\_
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These walls seems more like prison walls if you have to thirst for vindication… I can see anger behind any veil…
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thank you mother. the primordial house of god. the soft water of tears shaping cold hard stone. very nice images.
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Thank you my dear for your thoughtful comment. It’s a pleasure to meet you. Peace be upon you, MW 🌹
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Really lovely ❤
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Thank you 😊 my darling. Good to see you. 💜
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formed from shards of brokenness~ very interesting image there.
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Thank you for your visit and feedback, Rajani. Blessings to you. 🌹
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Speaks to all our elements!!
Beautiful piece
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Yes. It does. Thanks much for your feedback, Taruna. _/|\_
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This does feel mystical but I don’t feel much light is found in this “primordial House of God” where she seeks vindication…sad, and you convey the feeling very well!
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Your take on it is spot on, Gayle. Many thanks for your comment. 🙏🏼
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Oh, wow. This is really good.
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Many thanks for your visit and feedback Nebraska! Nice to meet you. 🙏🏻
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I too found this very mystical. Well written.
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Thanks a bunch for your feedback, Maria. 🌹
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May the divine Feminine open hearts and share her compassion and heal old wounds..
Loved your poem MW.. 🙂 Blessings your way Sue xx ❤
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Amen sweet Sue! Thank you for all the kind energy you brought into my space. Peace and blessings in abundance to you my friend. xoxo
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Like wise dear MW.. ❤ ❤
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A mystical poem; I like this. I’ve read it a few times to feel the experience – a very deep poem, thank you!
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Amen sis! I felt like you really grokked the poem. Thanks so much Doc Crystal. ❤
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