Chaiku: Last Breath

On 09/06/201612/28/2018 By mother wintermoonIn falling word fragments

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her last breath was like
the sound of a leaf falling
he touched a damp curl

Chaiku © Mother Wintermoon 2016

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14 thoughts on “Chaiku: Last Breath”

Purpleanais

WordPress decided that I should unfollow you without me having a say in the matter. It really bugs me how often that happens, I often find myself thinking: “where is so and so? I haven’t seen any of their posts for ages.” Then I have to hunt down their blog (not always easy) and I realise I’m not following them anymore even though I never did unfollow. Grrr. This is the worst issue I have with WordPress. Anyway, sorry for ranting 😜
I hope you’re well, I’m pleased I can once again see your beautiful words x

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09/22/2016 at 09201620169 p08am05+00:00 Reply
dornahainds

Marvelous!

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09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p10pm45+00:00 Reply
Grace

A beautiful write!

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09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p12pm57+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thank you Grace! xo, MW
  
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  09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p03pm27+00:00 Reply
rosemawrites

oh dear. this is soothing yet it hits the heart hard!!!

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09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p08am54+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thanks for reading and commenting Rosema! xo, MW
  
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  09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p03pm30+00:00 Reply
  1. rosemawrites
    
    it’s always my pleasure dear!
    
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    09/08/2016 at 09201620169 p03am28+00:00 Reply
Janice Wald

PS I wanted to tell you I know Sue dreamwalker. Also, I teach about the haiku to my seventh grade history students during my Japan unit.
Janice

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09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p02am11+00:00 Reply
Janice Wald

Hi mother winter moon,
You liked a comment I made on Aussie Ian’s blog, and I wanted to come by and say thank you and introduce myself. If you could use a blogging tip or two, check out my site. That’s what I write about. Nice to meet you.
Janice

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09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p02am23+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Hi, nice to meet you. 😊
  
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  09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p03pm06+00:00 Reply
Sue Dreamwalker

Beautiful MW.
Life’s final moments were described very much like the ones I have witnessed ❤

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09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p01am59+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thanks Sue. (((Hug)))
  
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  09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p06am45+00:00 Reply
aussieian2011

Life’s Final Moment
The Beginning Of The New
Loves Tender Farewell

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09/07/2016 at 09201620169 p12am18+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thank you for the beautiful response! Blessings, MW
  
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