Chaiku – Shaky Limbs

On 09/04/201603/04/2019 By mother wintermoonIn falling word fragments

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on shaky limbs
i tightrope across life
without a safety net

© Mother Wintermoon 2016

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12 thoughts on “Chaiku – Shaky Limbs”

dornahainds

Fabulous!

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09/06/2016 at 09201620169 p02pm07+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thank you sweetheart! xoxo
  
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  09/06/2016 at 09201620169 p05pm09+00:00 Reply
7128788elf

It seems to be working today! Yay, What a powerful piece, I think we all teeter over the tightrope of our life’s, so full of ups and downs. I love writing Haiku’s and other short forms of poetry, maybe I am a miniaturist at heart, and maybe you are too.
Have a great week, Charles. 🙂

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09/05/2016 at 09201620169 p01am48+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thanks bunches for your feedback my friend. I am a miniaturist at heart, ha! Love that. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Everything good to you, MW
  
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  1. 7128788elf
    
    Pleasant dreams, it is time for my bead!
    
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    09/05/2016 at 09201620169 p01am36+00:00 Reply
    1. mother wintermoon
      
      Night night. See ya on cloud nine.
      
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      09/05/2016 at 09201620169 p02am48+00:00 Reply
      1. 7128788elf
        
        Yes its after 1, and time for an earlier night, Cloud nine sounds great so see you there, best wishes and blessings, Charles. 🙂
        
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        09/05/2016 at 09201620169 p11pm31+00:00 Reply
Eddie Two Hawks

Life seems cruel at times

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09/04/2016 at 09201620169 p07pm32+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thanks for being here, my fine feathered friend.
  
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  09/04/2016 at 09201620169 p09pm51+00:00 Reply
insearchofitall

I think most of us do and I like how you explained it.

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09/04/2016 at 09201620169 p05pm14+00:00 Reply
1. mother wintermoon
  
  Thank you!! Some don’t have a safety net and others do, (a person or people in their life to catch them if they fall), or they get through life without ever being forced to walk that terrifying tightrope. I wrote it from my perspective as a child abused and abandoned by my parents/family and former homeless woman.
  
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  1. insearchofitall
    
    I do unfortunately understand all too well.Life can throw some real zingers at us. It can make us so much more grateful when we get to the top side.
    
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    09/04/2016 at 09201620169 p09pm11+00:00 Reply